Your story deserves to be addictive—page-turning from the very first line to the final word. I help romance authors transform raw drafts into emotionally immersive novels that readers can’t put down. A developmental edit is a “big picture” edit. Many authors skip this, choosing to focus on the nitty-gritty details of grammar and mechanics, instead, but this is perhaps the most important part of your book. This type of edit will help you figure out how to hook your readers and keep them invested, make sure every scene moves the plot along, ensure you’ve adequately built your world, ensure strong character development and bonds between characters, comprehensively illustrate plot arcs and backstories, and so much more. You’ll receive extensive marginal comments, as well as a lengthy editorial letter. I'm a former teacher with a degree in Creative Writing and English, and approach editing from a teaching standpoint. I feel that editing doesn't end when the manuscript is returned to the writer, but is a recursive, continuing process. If you ever have questions past the first pass, I'm always available for follow-up. WHY WORK WITH ME? I’m a USA Today Bestselling Author and professional editor with over a decade in the romance industry, specializing in dark romance, reverse harem, contemporary romance, romantic suspense, and steamy small-town series. I’ve guided debut authors to their first bestseller tags, helped established authors elevate their prose, and worked with both indie and small press publishers. WHAT YOU GET • Developmental Feedback – Story structure, character arcs, pacing, stakes, and genre-specific beats. • Inline Comments – Scene-by-scene insights, suggestions, and reader-perspective reactions. • Editorial Letter – several pages outlining strengths, areas for growth, and actionable next steps. HOW WE’LL WORK TOGETHER Discovery – You share your manuscript. Deep Dive – I read and assess your story, marking inline notes and drafting your editorial letter. Delivery – You receive your edit plus an editorial letter. Ongoing Support – I’m available for optional clarifying questions after delivery. WHAT CLIENTS SAY Vi Carter, USA Today Bestselling Author "Lori's approach is transformative. She does more than just correct errors—she explains the reasons behind what may not work, empowering me to learn and evolve. This experience has been a revelation. Lori's instructions are nothing short of remarkable. With each edit, I get new insights, which is crucial for me as an author eager to refine my craft. I cannot recommend Lori's services highly enough." Jennifer Hartmann, USA Today Bestselling Author, Amazon Bestselling Author "Sharp, clever, kind, responsive, punctual. Lori is all the fabulous things. Grateful to call her my friend and my favorite comma corrector." AC Wilds "I've been working with CHE for a few months now and I could not be happier with my choice. Lori is a fantastic editor who has gone above what I've expected. She truly turned my manuscript into something beautiful. She's made a client out of me for as long as she wants to put up with me!"

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